Moonlight brushes your smile
A simple touch
The rush
A surge
Laughter pulls on your eyes
You almost glimpse
A place I saved for you
I shield it
With a giggle and a smile
In a time of youth
I envisioned what would be
You.
Me.
Palpable and complex
Something.
Nothing.
Everything.
Spun into perfection
The smallest nuance
Plays on my mind
I squirm inside
Fruitless avoidance
Make it last
Eternity for an instant
The melody of life
Strange impediment
Across the page
Push this away
A rhythmic obstacle
From the start
We end
Perhaps.
10 comments:
Very nice!
I like the imagery in this one, Jenn!
Yes, quite lovely. =)
Lovely..Darn, your good..I can't write anything..lucky my blog doesn't take real work or I would be in serious trouble.
aw--- this is so sweet, boy girl crush.
That's oddly compelling. I liked it, a lot.
(Don't quite know if I knew exactly where you were coming from - or going - but I assume the general tenor is what was important, and I certainly felt that.)
"I envisioned what would be
You. Me."
......who can't identify with this? really! it's beautiful jenn!!
it's good to see you posting all of this prose. i'm enjoying it very much!
...what's that? i'm inspiring someone? that's weird, thanks though. you're so sweet :).....
Enjoyed it! a very nice "melody of life"
Very nice! I like the way you ended it.
You wrote this? I'm impressed! Really impressed! I can't write anything!
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